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It hurts by *luciddreamer4423:iconluciddreamer4423:

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I know why it hurts
It hurts because i let it hurt
I let you hurt me

I know why it hurts
It hurts because i press to hard
I let the the steel hurt me

A team effort to bring me down
A curse of blood flesh and metal
Tearing me down inside and out

I hurts so bad
Why do you continue to do this to me
I know i did you wrong in the past
But release your grip on me
Let me be free

Oh god it hurts
Its to deep this time.......to deep........to deep



And remember kids...i dont cut to die
I cut to live.
©2004-2010 *luciddreamer4423
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it hurts so much

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~CasperBloom Mar 26, 2004, 12:35:12 PM
very powerful i rele like this one, i feel it expresses me as well except i don't know Celeste. :P i know a mike tho, the one who caused my pain :(
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*luciddreamer4423 Mar 26, 2004, 12:36:08 PM
i think im gonna take the name out to make it more generalized....i wrote it last night after a big fight.....yeah

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I want to suck your blood.......Bllllluuuuuuhhhhhhhhh

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~CasperBloom Mar 26, 2004, 12:38:35 PM
oh i understand, i would have done that to u know with the name, if it wuz a big thing full of pain
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*luciddreamer4423 Mar 26, 2004, 12:39:10 PM
yeah

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I want to suck your blood.......Bllllluuuuuuhhhhhhhhh

i support :icongrow-the-fck-up:
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~crossouthei-s Mar 26, 2004, 5:26:26 PM
you didnt..? did you?
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*luciddreamer4423 Mar 27, 2004, 10:15:01 AM
i did

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I want to suck your blood.......Bllllluuuuuuhhhhhhhhh

i support :icongrow-the-fck-up:
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~inhiskeeping Mar 27, 2004, 5:02:52 PM
this is really good...i especially like the last part...i dont cut to die i cut to live...i can relate

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your halo's slipping down to choke you now...
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~sasoriza-chan Mar 28, 2004, 11:38:11 PM
Very intesne and well writen.

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"I'd yell out at them, 'I'm not falling out of this tree for you bastards!" ~Old man in tree to alligators under tree
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